Battle Cry

some days, some nights
some live, some die
in the way of the samurai
some fight, some bleed
sun up to sun down
the sons of a battle cry

-Shing 02 "Battle Cry"

The sentence structure and use of commas help the piece flow together. This adds a rhythmic beat to the piece making it easier and more enjoyable to read. The use of alliteration also plays a strong role in the piece with the continued use of the S through out the chorus. I think that this is a great piece because it structure and how it leaves its self open for any one's interpretation. It not specific so anyone can come up with there own conclusion about what it means and how they feel about the writing. That's whats gives this piece its power.

Some slow Some fast
some future some past
come back in a blast
some truth some lie
the man of the battle cry