Sunday, September 21, 2008

Weekly Blog 3_Lunkun Deng

A usage dictionary is not a bible or even a textbook but rather just the record of one smart person’s attempts to work out answers to certain very difficult questions. (FOLIO, 42)

The sentence uses a powerful way to define a subject. First the author gives two negative examples to clarify what the subject shouldn’t be. By using simple words such as “but”, “rather” and “just”, the author makes a turning point to exactly define what the subject should be. The author combines denials and upbuildings to define the subject briefly and clearly.

A true love is not a diamond or even a promise but rather just the ordinary actions of one responsible person’s attempts to comfort the very tenderness of her/his dearest.

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