Blakes Blog

Usage Wars are very important for people in America to learn. The Usage Wars will have an effect on every person living and working in America. All of the schools will have to teach a different style of writing if the language is changed. Many other things will change in the country. Newspapers will be written in a different writhing style. This means that all writers and editors will have to change. These are just a few examples; however, all writing in the country would change.
This paragraph is much shorter and more to the point. In the first part of each sentence there is a clear subject and strong verb. The sentences run into each other very good. It is really easy to understand the point of each sentence. The topics in the paragraph flow well. The first sentence has the main idea of the whole paragraph. This paragraph is much more organized and has no sentences that are off topic.