“Change” – the word that every American uses today. Change gas prices, change health care, change our economy, and foremost, change our president. The change that needs to take place this election is huge and many people need this change to pursue their own American dream. In 2008 two men are running to be the next president of the United States, Barack Hussein Obama from Illinois and John Sidney McCain from Arizona. Each man has their own idea on what needs to be done to fix America’s problems. Both candidates desire to change America for the better, but in fundamentally different ways. Even though both are good intentioned men who strive to help America, I believe that only one can bring us the change we need. This man is Barack Hussein Obama.
I really focused on my transitions in my paragraph and introductions of both candidates. What I was looking for was using one word (i.e. Change) to explain my whole paragraph. This way the reader could understand it better by seeing this word and understand the main idea of my paper. I made sure my paper was concise so that it didn't over run and cause confusion.
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