tony conway

With the Presidential Election just around the corner, much debate is in the air on who should succeed President Bush. I believe the man to replace him should be Sen. John McCain. His ideas on addressing certain issues are ones with I agree. Some of these issues include the economy, Iraq, and education. His stands on these helped me decide that John McCain should be elected president in the upcoming election.

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