Everybody has their own reasons for which they vote, for whom they vote. Those reasons vary from political views to character views or whether or not a person even cares about the election. Personally I base my opinion around a candidate’s character. My emphasis on a person’s character is fairly simple to explain. There are two types of people out there: High character and low character. A high character individual is going to try and carry out his ideas and values in an honest way, a way that can be admired and respected. The low character individual is going to carry out certain things in a fair way and certain things in a shady manner. For a person held in high esteem, like the President of the United States of America, that will be the central figure of attention, character is important. You cannot change who a person is, but you can change how their politics are shaped. If you, like a have, factor in the candidates character there is a standout amongst our two party leaders- Barack Hussein Obama. Obama should end up as the winner because of his high character.

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