Blake's Blog

In a little over a week there will be a new President in the White House. Right now there is a close race going on between Barack Obama and John McCain. The President will be a difficult position to take over since the economy is in a bad position. The only way that our country will be able to get out of the economic crisis is if Obama is elected as our next President. Obama has a great plan in mind to change our economy so it will be more affordable for Americans to live.

I believe that all of my sentences have a clear subject and verb within the first words of the sentence. The sentences are short and to the point. There are no extra added words to make the sentence weak. At the end of each of the sentences it is easy to tell what is going to happen next because the sentences lead into each other. In the opening paragraph all of the topics are related to each other so the paragraph will flow smoothly. At the end of my paragraph it would be ok to change the last sentence with the title and it would still make sense.