The election of 2008 has come down to one thing, and that is the day of the election. There has been a lot of money spent to persuade the people to their side, even though most people made up there minds on whom they were going to vote for from the beginning. I was one of those people; I decided I was going to vote for McCain as soon as he became the nominee for the Republican Party. I am going to vote for McCain in this election because of my own reasons.
This shows clear writing because it flows with my ideas one right after another. The whole paragraph seems to lead you right into what i am trying to say in the rest of the paper, but the clarity of the sentence are what i am not sure of. They sound clear to me but i am never fully sure that they are as clear as possible.
Ethan Flater
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