tyler presley

In the presidential election of 2008, there is a close run between Barack Obama for the Democrats and John McCain for the Republicans. The reason this election is so close is because of the controversy in the White House now. The American people are wondering about what is going to happen with the War in Iraq, the tax rates now, the policy of American education, and the devastation that has hit the stock market recently and these competitors are taking advantage of these situations to prove they are the one that is going to fix everything.

In this paragraph it gives you examples of what is going to be talked about in my paper. It is clear and gets right to the point with minimal words that could be thrown out. I also don't stray from the point of my paper. In the first couple words of my sentence I give you the subject that my paper is based on. On a different note however, some things that came up that was difficult was whether or not I should write about who I think is going to win and who I want to win. So in the end I just decided to write about both considering they are opposing topics.